Rumspringer: "A Farewell to Farms"

Here's my latest batch of practice pages for Rumspringer. This is sort of a condensed version of the story's first 60 pages or so. I would love to hear your feedback. The harsher the better.

my doomed affair - the flowers (revisited)

These pages fold out of the center of the "Heart" mini-comic and function as a flashback after panel 4.

my doomed affair - the end (revisited)

Here's a retelling of the first My Doomed Affair strip, which I made into a heart-shaped mini-comic. If you didn't know, the strip ran in Flagpole Magazine for a few years, and this one was the very first, tho actually last in the timeline of the story.

my doomed career

my doomed career #4 - the plastic bag

I don't really remember doing this, but my friend Bret likes to repeat the story that I apparently told him. So I guess this happened?

my doomed career #3 - the sick bucket

For once I'm a good guy.

my doomed career #2 - the forbidden gum